You rent a 4 bedroom house, which you share with two other students. However, there are several problems with this house that need fixing. You also find it expensive and would like to find another student to share the spare bedroom.
Write a letter to the estate agency.
explain your situation
describe the problems with the houses
say what you would like to happen
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a Harsha, living in a four bedroom house, which is on the north street of your estate property. which I rented last year. I am sharing this house with two students. Here, I am writing to you, because we are suffering from several problems in the house, which need to fix as soon as possible. At the same time, it is not affordable to stay with two students by paying rent for four-bedrooms.
There are leakages in the bathrooms, and the bathroom tub is clogging frequently. The flush button of the toilet is not working properly. So we have to use the bathroom of another bedroom, which is quite uncomfortable for everyone, as we are sharing it. It is also time taking to get ready early morning. We all three has to get ready by 6.30 am to attend the class on time.
It is also expensive to stay at the four-bedroom house with students, as one bedroom is leaving empty. We are paying unnecessarily for that bedroom, like electricity, room rent, etc. So, I want to find another student who can live in that spare bedroom. It will be more affordable if we share it with one more student. I hope you will understand our situation and fix these problems.
Waiting for your reply.
Yours Faithfully,
Harsha
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am a Harsha, living in a four bedroom ...
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Line 2, column 107, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...e north street of your estate property. which I rented last year. I am sharing this h...
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Line 2, column 107, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e north street of your estate property. which I rented last year. I am sharing this h...
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Line 2, column 401, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...udents by paying rent for four-bedrooms. There are leakages in the bathrooms, and...
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Line 4, column 384, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... by 6.30 am to attend the class on time. It is also expensive to stay at the four...
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Line 6, column 112, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...udents, as one bedroom is leaving empty. We are paying unnecessarily for that bed...
^^
Line 6, column 329, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le if we share it with one more student. I hope you will understand our situation...
^^
Line 6, column 395, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd our situation and fix these problems. Waiting for your reply. Yours Faithfu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1075.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63362068966 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08743173056 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599137931034 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.2550584095 44.8134815571 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5833333333 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387202414597 0.216113520407 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120731435918 0.0766984524023 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857670624648 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156066785114 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.164812526706 0.0580467560999 284% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.