Many people believe that social networking sites ( such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society.
To what extend do you agree?
The social networking sites, such as facebook, instagram has very important place in modern era. These social sites are mirror of our advanced society. I am agree with that, these sites has bad influence on our society and individuals. They are destroying our young generation by provoking to crime.
Firstly, the people are using these social sites to take a advantage of innocent people by fooling them, Such as creating fake facebook accounts. They make friendship with people and induce them to participate in crime or abuse people. The most of the sex related and human trafficing crime starts from these social site.It is very easy for youngster, under age 18 year old to get into this fantasy world. They wants to try everything,they don’t understand what is wrong or right. The college or university students spending more time on these social media, instead of becoming social in person. People are not talking to each other face to face. They don’t have time for their family. They are spending more money on games and other sex related activities. This habit also accustom them to consume drugs and participate in cyber crimes.
Furthermore, the cyber crimes, which are the dangerous crimes in our modern society. Our future generation spending more time on this horrible crime, which leads to hacking the personal information ,bank details, identity stealing etc. Because, they can not get money from their parents to enjoy their life. Secondly,the internet games,people are more addictive to these games. They are spending their valuable time and the money by playing this games,regardless of health issues, such as, back pain, neck pain and reducing the grades in the college or university etc.
In conclusion, these social networking sites ruining our young generation. It has danger and long life impact on our society and individual life. We are forgetting about family time.We are leaving behind our social values and ethics.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...re mirror of our advanced society. I am agree with that, these sites has bad influenc...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g generation by provoking to crime. Firstly, the people are using these soci...
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Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...le are using these social sites to take a advantage of innocent people by fooling...
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Line 3, column 327, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...ing crime starts from these social site.It is very easy for youngster, under age 1...
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Line 3, column 417, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
...ld to get into this fantasy world. They wants to try everything,they don’t understand...
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Line 3, column 440, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...tasy world. They wants to try everything,they don’t understand what is wrong or right...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gs and participate in cyber crimes. Furthermore, the cyber crimes, which are...
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Line 5, column 215, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...eads to hacking the personal information ,bank details, identity stealing etc. Bec...
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Line 5, column 334, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...ir parents to enjoy their life. Secondly,the internet games,people are more addictiv...
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Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , people
... their life. Secondly,the internet games,people are more addictive to these games. They...
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Line 5, column 469, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , regardless
...time and the money by playing this games,regardless of health issues, such as, back pain, n...
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Line 5, column 586, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...grades in the college or university etc. In conclusion, these soci...
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Line 7, column 198, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: We
...fe. We are forgetting about family time.We are leaving behind our social values an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18611987382 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60309906649 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570977917981 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 5.43587174349 331% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.2636158029 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.85 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170781504907 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534113201582 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527119703088 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116056965376 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055990130138 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...re mirror of our advanced society. I am agree with that, these sites has bad influenc...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g generation by provoking to crime. Firstly, the people are using these soci...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...le are using these social sites to take a advantage of innocent people by fooling...
^
Line 3, column 327, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...ing crime starts from these social site.It is very easy for youngster, under age 1...
^^
Line 3, column 417, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
...ld to get into this fantasy world. They wants to try everything,they don’t understand...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 440, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...tasy world. They wants to try everything,they don’t understand what is wrong or right...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gs and participate in cyber crimes. Furthermore, the cyber crimes, which are...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 215, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...eads to hacking the personal information ,bank details, identity stealing etc. Bec...
^^
Line 5, column 334, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...ir parents to enjoy their life. Secondly,the internet games,people are more addictiv...
^^^^
Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , people
... their life. Secondly,the internet games,people are more addictive to these games. They...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 469, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , regardless
...time and the money by playing this games,regardless of health issues, such as, back pain, n...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 586, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...grades in the college or university etc. In conclusion, these soci...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 198, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: We
...fe. We are forgetting about family time.We are leaving behind our social values an...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18611987382 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60309906649 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570977917981 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 5.43587174349 331% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.2636158029 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.85 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170781504907 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534113201582 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527119703088 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116056965376 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055990130138 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.