You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information on the dates, the program, the accommodation, and the cost.
Dear Sir,
My name is Jot and I writing this in order to enquire about the seminar which is going to unfold in Africa next week as I want to apply for the same.
Well, I came to know that your organization is planning to organize a study program for rural children in Africa and I am curious to work for this program. Actually, I have done a Master in Computer Application and also have a degree in Education. I am working as a teacher in primary school for the last 4 years.
I would like to know that when the program is going to take place such as the dates. Also, I have an inquiry about the program where particular in Africa it will organize and what is included in that program which modules are to teach to the children over there. One further question, what about the accommodation, whether it will be arranged by the company and what will be the total cost of the trip.
I am very keen to work with the organization. Please write me back and answer my quires. I look forward to your reply.
Yours Faithfully,
Jot
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 20, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
Dear Sir, My name is Jot and I writing this in order to enquire about ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, look, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 838.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31958762887 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44329896907 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567010309278 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2705192181 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1818181818 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156912760425 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510041408476 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425398373284 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878827552154 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232260113237 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.