Your friend is coming over to stay with you. However, you will be away on vacation for a month. Write him/her a letter and say:
– How to get the keys to your flat
– How to operate the equipment in the flat, and
– Suggest a few places of interest to visit
Dear Jot,
How are you? I hope this letter finds you well. I am basically writing this to let you know about certain things before you come to stay in my apartment.
Well, I would like to tell you that you can get the key to my flat from my neighbor’s house which is flat number 345. You need to ring their home bell and will pass you the keys to my apartment and my apartment number is 346.
My apartment is equipped with are the required appliances. Firstly, the light board is on the right of the door after entering you can operate lights and fans from there and one board switch is on television if you watch television you can switch it off from there. The kitchen is on the rights hand side of the living room and the fridge is placed on the left-hand side and the gas stove and cylinder are shut down from the regulator. I have kept the toaster in the kitchen cupboard.
I kept the list of places where you can pay a visit are the sub-divisional library, the Le Corbusier Center, the rock garden, and the lake. These all places are has a clam environment which will suit you.
I have written everything in this letter even if, there will be any problem just call me on 735353443 as my cell phone will always be will me. I hope you would enjoy being in my apartment. I look forward to your reply.
Yours Faithfully,
Kinu
- You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service Say when and how you ordered the cheque book Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the man 70
- The best way to improve health is to exercise daily To what extent do you agree 82
- You have heard about plans to build new apartments in a public park near your home You want to give your opinion about this Write a letter to the editor of your local newspaper In your letter Explain how you learnt about these plans Say what you think of 70
- Some people think that zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed However others think that zoos are useful to protect rare animals Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- Many local languages today are dying out due to the rise of languages like English Is this a positive or negative development 64
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 189, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... you would enjoy being in my apartment. I look forward to your reply. Yours Fait...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1089.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 253.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30434782609 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29041749022 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573122529644 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2017793313 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294710333213 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100032025813 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494661381709 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155130215898 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450312911909 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.12 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.