Some people think cooking at home is a waste of time.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
There is an increaseingly popular belief that cooking at home is a waste of time . However,I find myself in complete disagreement with this opinion because of the merits they offer.
First, Cooking is not as time-consuming as you think.With the inception of modern era, There are many convenient services for customers especially raw ingredients delivery. All you need is to write down what you need to prepare for the meal on the software and click done.So you just need to focus on preparing the meal.If you still have concerns about dirty dishes after meal,you can assign people in the meal to clean up or just buy a dishwasher to make it easier. According to my calculations, this only took less than an hour.
Secondly, it exerts a number of positive effect on people. As I mentioned, the materials we buy must be hygienic and healthy , so you can prepare the dish to suit your taste.Besides, this is an opportunity to heals relationships with people during meals and improves the cooking ability for an independent life. Think about it, after a hard working day, you cook for yourself and enjoy it with your family, which will help you relax and tighten the family bonds and also enhance cooking skills in transition to adulthood to face the future
In conclusion, my opinion is that home cooked meal is not only healthy and hygienic but it also improve personal skills and the family relationship.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1167.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84232365145 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76001330751 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622406639004 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.626526072 49.4020404114 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 145.875 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.125 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29464274044 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121798011918 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748055175118 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180752748716 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594791695859 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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