Subjects art,drama and music are more important than other school subjects and therefore should be given more time in the calendar. Do you agree or disagree?
In the school curriculum, all subjects have their own significance. In my opinion, subjects like art, drama and music are also vitally important for the development of the children as well as if any student has talent in this field, with the guidance of school authorities it gets the potential of becoming his future career.
To begin with, every subject taught in a school provides a direction to the children whereas these extra subjects enhance the personality of students. These subjects also increase the confidence to express themselves or widen the scope of creativity among children. For example, if students study only academic courses they cannot show their hobbies which they love to do, however singing, painting and drama give a chance to display their extra hidden talents.
Looking further into its brighter side, if some particular students are extremely versatile or creative in their talents, school authorities should assist those talented students by offering an education in that field. For instance, in numerous schools training is provided to those students who win various accolades in extra curricular activities. Moreover, these extra skills become a fruitful career for the students, which further makes them national or world known personalities. Therefore, providing extra attention to non academic subjects could be beneficial in a child's overall growth and establish a worldwide name with the help of their talent.
Overall, it seems advisable that teaching every subject in a school is certainly crucial. Nevertheless, I believe that subjects related to art drama and music would thrive the confidence among children to express themselves through these mediums and build a career out of their hobbies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 307, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rities it gets the potential of becoming his future career. To begin with, eve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, whereas, for example, for instance, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43542435424 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74536761489 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623616236162 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6798344687 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.909090909 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2727272727 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191193748682 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804427181142 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484815278589 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134896538257 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466070541466 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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