Task 2:
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In any historical period, wealth has been expected to accompany with humanity because the wealthy has owned the substantial power, and resources of the society. Although it has been argued that the paramount importance of being rich is taking care of individuals and their families, the help to other people is such crucial value that the rich can be considered for their spiritual welfare.
Firstly, the richness is always along with a substantial impact on society. By the welfare, the wealthy contribute more than ordinal people to the charity resulting in higher efficiency. For example, Bill Gates, one of the top global billionaires, can be conducive to save the life of million children in Africa by his donation to the research about water sanitary. Besides, the rich are less reliant on the financial and political pressure in their voluntary. Compared to people owning moderate assets, they are more reserved to help other people as they have not ensured their personal life.
Secondly, the property can adapt almost demands, except for the spiritual one, which is merely existed in the humanitarian activity. This kind of activity seems as if mental relief because it brings happiness to them. Specifically, the entrepreneurs enrich at the expense of other competitors; hence, they are susceptible to guilty complex and want to take steps to feel free. On the other hand, the support to other people is considered to be the social responsibility of the fortune and the reimbursement that they earn from society. In recent years, this attitude has been determined by the fact that some billionaires donated almost their property to a voluntary.
In conclusion, richness provides adequate power as well as resources to helps other people. It plays a pivotal role in the spiritual life of the wealthy and relieves their guilt complex.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, except for, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78487980989 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.604797604 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.571428571 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175169334162 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541879193645 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045126222714 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104342648756 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356304883525 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.