The following table gives statistics showing the aspects of quality of life in five countries.
The tabular data delineates four economic indicators to show the standard of living in five selected countries for the year 1982.
Overall, it can be seen that the well-being of American citizens was far higher than the other four countries, while that of Bangladesh was having the least amongst all.
First of all, the USA, which is a developed country had the best figures for all the parameters. It's GNP stood at 13,160 dollars per head. The figures for daily calorie intake and life expectancy were also much higher, and it also had the lowest rate of infant mortality (12 per thousand children). On the other hand, Bangladesh witnessed by far the lowest quality of life. As the GNP of this country was 100 times less than the USA's. Notably, the calorie intake and life expectancy was 1877 and 40 respectively, which was exactly half of that of USA. Also, child deaths in Bangladesh was 10 times greater.
Amongst the other developing countries, all three were having an almost similar quality of life ratings. The range of indicators for Egypt, Indonesia and Bolivia were similar, with Egypt having the superior life-standard. However, the infant mortality rate in Egypt was slightly higher than Indonesia’s at 97 deaths per 1000 compared to 87 in Indonesia.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, well, while, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9765258216 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59617196752 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586854460094 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.1658343624 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3636363636 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 5.23603664747 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118963492818 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497348667213 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493358806694 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0742365059872 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511573735241 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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