Recent decades have witnessed that more and more children of today's world are largely rely on video games to spend their free time.It is argued by some people that all the entertainment activities should be based on educational motives.I disagree with this statement and the pros and cons will be discussed in this essay.
In general, today's modern world provides a wide range of oppourtunities for young children to pass time effectively.Art and craft,martial arts, do it yourself activities could be some of those varities to encourage youngsters for motivating them to be independent while enjoying free time.Leisure times are meant to deviate children from study for sometimes and preparing them for to focus again on classroom lessons.Physical activities are important for children to grow physically and mentally.If It is again be forced to be study related during leisure time that would be a complete disaster for students.For example, teaching algebra or abacus in play time may not give rise to positive results.This could end up in hating the subjects.
On the other hand, fun learning might be possible solution for slow learners or less motivated students.For those who lack interest in learning could be encouraged to study by playful pedagogical methods.For mentally challenged pupil all the class hours are free periods.To help them get rid of their difficulties learning while playing might be a great option. However for normal children leisure time must be spent for playing games and sports.
In conclusion, leisure activities collaborated with education may be essential for some gifted children.However In my opinion entertainment activities must be fun and should not be combined with education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in general, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10189109981 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588888888889 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 20.2975951904 266% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 221.149361292 49.4020404114 448% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 291.6 106.682146367 273% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.0 20.7667163134 260% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.2 7.06120827912 286% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280749264595 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170965381256 0.084324248473 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621113204283 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178716452212 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479120541415 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.0 13.0946893788 237% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.21 50.2224549098 16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 11.3001002004 226% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.93 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.88 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.1190380762 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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