Some people regard the video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?
The industry of games is becoming more popular nowadays. Some people think that games are not dangerous while others believe games have a negative impact on the people. this essay will discuss why the advantages of playing games outweigh the drawbacks.
Firstly, games are one of the forms of the entertainment and we cannot deny it. playing computer games unite people and allows them to have a fun together regardless of their location or age. For example, I always play with my brother who is older than me, but we can cooperate together and get a fun from playing. Secondly, different forms of video games can be used in education. children study and memorize more and better when they learn a new information through games. And not only children can study like this, but adults also perceive the information much better through the playing. The scientists have done the experiment where they have found out that children, who were learning with games, demonstrated better results than children who were not doing this.
However, it is often thought that people who play games become more cruel. In my opinion, it is incorrect because there are many causes why people become callous. These people give an example of kills that have been made by teenagers who liked cruel computer games. but I believe that news just wants to find guilty persons and as a result, game industry suffers from that.
To summarize, the fact that video games are useful in education and as a type of entertainment clearly outweighs the wanton prosecution that was made by news in order to make hype and find guilty in the terrible cases of violence. it requires
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90035587189 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44109956475 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583629893238 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8486791223 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374403386486 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114455423139 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855093683047 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222244366003 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531942489745 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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