The maps below show the changes in Fenton from 1990 to 2012
The map displayed the transformation of Frenton in 22 years (1990-2012).
Overall Frenton has significantly improved over the years. There are obvious increased of residential areas, few building had been changed whereas some upgraded respectively (hospital, hotel, cinema, and supermarket).
In 1990, west part of Frenton has a school which is just beside the bank and opposite that is a hospital near the play ground and library. The northwest is the remote side of high street where you can see a vast tree area. Moreover on the east part of Frenton is where you can find leisure part. Shops, theatre, cafe and park are closely situated beside the residential area.
As we can see in the map, that over the period of time Frenton had reshaped some of areas and buildings around its High street. First was the bank which became a restaurant after several years. Next was the hospital that had been substantially renovated together with the upgrades of supermarket, hotel and golf course. Technopark was built and as a result of that there are significant increase of housing facilities around Frenton during those period. And laslty, the area where trees are seemingly present had disappread.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 224, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...eet where you can see a vast tree area. Moreover on the east part of Frenton is where yo...
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Line 8, column 41, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...As we can see in the map, that over the period of time Frenton had reshaped some of areas and ...
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Line 8, column 77, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the areas') or simply say ''some areas''.
Suggestion: some of the areas; some areas
...the period of time Frenton had reshaped some of areas and buildings around its High street. F...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, whereas, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1116751269 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6940593217 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609137055838 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.264094757 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9166666667 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0768831611867 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0310379101219 0.103423049105 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640376738513 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789272901431 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892191210182 0.0819641961636 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.