You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
Explain why you want to work in the company's head office for six months
Say how your work could be done while you are away
Ask for his/her help in arranging it
Dear Mr Sam,
I am writing to express my interest to spend six months at our head office in Canada.
I have been leading the Design team at our location for three years now and have successfully led the introduction of our latest engine. The performance lab in Canada is the only place where we conduct testing for our engines and I believe it will be a great opportunity for me to be actively involved and learn the process. This understanding of the testing process will help our group to be able to develop better designs upfront and increase company revenues.
Since the time difference between the two locations is negligible, I can still oversee all my team activities from Canada. I have already had one on one meetings with all the members to plan out activities for next couple of months.
I would greatly appreciate if you can bring this up with your Manager in your next weekly meeting. I strongly believe this move will position our group and company at large for greater success and look forward to your support and backing in making it possible.
Yours sincerely,
John Doe
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 150, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one meeting', 'a meeting', or simply 'meetings'?
Suggestion: one meeting; a meeting; meetings
... from Canada. I have already had one on one meetings with all the members to plan out activi...
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Line 9, column 100, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ur Manager in your next weekly meeting. I strongly believe this move will positio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76041666667 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56222474809 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651041666667 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.8433840348 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.555555556 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17546408133 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753925294714 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612478108509 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11359608141 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788467780464 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.