Write a letter to your local council that road in front of your house is damaged. In your letter, you should:
Tell him your name and where are you living
Describe the problem
Suggest what you want him to do.
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Ruchi, a resident of Prasavnath society, for 7 years, and I am writing this letter to draw your attention towards the problem of the dilapidated road outside my residence which is causing unbearable miseries for all the residents.
Three months ago, a builder started the construction of a new block in the lane, where my home is situated. Since all the heavy vehicles carrying construction material used to pass through this lane, the road got broken. At that time, the builder promised us to repair the road; however, three months have passed, but no action has been taken and the condition of the road is still pathetic. There have also been some incidents of minor accidents due to the damaged road.
In view of the above-mentioned situation, I would advise you to send a team of construction workers so that road can be repaired at the earliest.
I am looking forward to a prompt response in this matter.
Yours faithfully,
Ruchi Verma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85628742515 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77213821083 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664670658683 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.2230429243 44.8134815571 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.375 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159636945479 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615153895957 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557011325961 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0662714965626 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514259714501 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.