You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town.
Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Ruchi, and I am staying in a town that is just 5 Km away from your store. I am writing this letter to inquire about the availability and price of a few electrical items at your shop.
Since I have recently moved to the city, I am in dire need of a microwave oven, a fridge, and a washing machine. Although products from different brands may be available on your shelves, I do not want to compromise with the quality; therefore, I would prefer all products from Samsung. Kindly let me know if these are available with you and will it be possible for you to order these items for me?
Also, kindly apprise me about the price of the above-listed items along with any sort of discount available on products and its mode of payment. I would be grateful if you inform me about the period up to which you can hold the goods for me.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Ruchi Verma
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2022-10-15 | kaushikprat@gmail.com | view | |
| 2020-04-16 | RV0209 | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, so, therefore, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 766.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37714285714 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48256615096 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622857142857 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1468313287 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1111111111 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192617980447 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744197309193 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708895944789 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109410746519 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355147545222 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.