You are planning to return to your hometown after a long absence. Write a letter to one of your old friends. In your letter:
• Explain that you are coming and that you’d like to meet again
• Describe what you’re planning to do
• Say where you’re staying and when you’d be free to meet
Dear Emily,
How’re you?
It’s been a long time since we saw each other and hope you’re doing fine in this period. First of all, heartiest congratulations on your achievement of clearing the IAS exam! You deserve it because you’ve been doing very hard work to crack the exam. I’m sure you will be glad to hear that after so long, finally, I got some time to visit India. My arrival will be on 23 April, and my trip will be a week-long.
Since I’ve got a keen interest in Indian history and art, I’m planning to visit various museums and art galleries in Rajasthan. Also, there are some beautiful gardens in the city which I always wanted to see since my childhood days and now is the time to make my dream come true. After spending 3 days in Rajasthan, my plan is to come to your native place Delhi.
You don’t need to worry about my stay arrangements as I’ve already booked a guest house near Nehru Stadium. By the way, will you be free to meet me on 26 April? We’d roam around the city like we used to do in our college days, and then we can spend the rest of the day at your home with family members.
I’m super excited to meet you soon.
Best Wishes,
Ruchi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 102, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the heartiest'.
Suggestion: , the heartiest
... doing fine in this period. First of all, heartiest congratulations on your achievement of ...
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Line 4, column 398, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...ill be on 23 April, and my trip will be a week-long. Since I’ve got a keen interest in I...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, so, then, by the way, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38565022422 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20553963363 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67264573991 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4135003824 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2307692308 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1538461538 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312929047705 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115138434853 0.0766984524023 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080669860657 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177431548426 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591526615494 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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