There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that local council wants to sell this park.
Write a letter to a local newspaper in your letter:
Introduce yourself
Describe the importance of this park
Say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to request you to revise your decision of selling the common park of bank colony.
My name is Vikas, and I have been a resident of the bank colony since last seven years. I am extremely satisfied with the work that has been done by you so far for the development of our society. However, I and other residents are little disappointed to know that local government has decided to sale this park to a businessman for the construction of a mall.
This park holds a lot of importance in our day to day life as it serves the best place for the people of your locality to socialize themselves. In addition to this, a group of people visit this park every morning to carry out their meditation and exercise routines. Further, parents feel this park to be the safest place for the children to play in the evening. Hence, closing this park will disturb the daily routines of people.
I would like to mention that if the decision of selling the park is not reversed, I along with other residents have to highlight this case into media to draw the attention of our state government.
Looking forward for your cooperation in this matter.
Yours faithfully,
Vikas sharma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, look, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67441860465 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57097835303 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590697674419 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5236099308 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3636363636 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326646244585 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117769704374 0.0766984524023 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683890287542 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177205283552 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877174963792 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.