Many feel that students today should learn practical skills at school such as car maintenance and managing a bank account.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many feel that students today should learn practical skills at school such as car maintenance and managing a bank account.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Education and skills play a crucial role in everyone’s life. Strata of the populace reiterate that as per the demand pupil should learn pragmatic dexterities at school like car maintenance. Contrarily, opponent deems that they should grab academic knowledge. This is in disagreement with the above-said notion.
To begin with, the people who believe that practical skills should be taught in schools support this by saying that these skills play a significant role in life. Despite of being well-educated everyone needs skills such as maintaining a bank balance in the account and maintaining a car. These skills make people self-dependent and specialization in a particular field which enables them to find an optimum job after completion of the study. Moreover, they have a thought that study is merely used anywhere in practical life.
However, in my opinion, school time is the best time to learn new knowledge. Everyone is aware of the fact that most of the company like to appoint the people who have an in-depth understanding of the subject which mean that the school studies actually act as a base for the whole life. Moreover, during school time one comes across various subjects from which one later selects a subject for majors and also decides to pursue his career with that subject. For instance, the survey done by “The Times” reveals that with new advancement around 60 percent of the syllabus of the school books change every year which in turn mean that students are updated with new facts and figure.
To conclude, nonetheless to say practical skills might play an important role in one’s life, even though, during the academic time student should only concentrate on the academic instead of getting any experience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 312, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...isagreement with the above-said notion. To begin with, the people who believe th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, well, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13636363636 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70401821541 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1323858241 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215903908037 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748860879871 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590750051549 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1346208726 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481590672168 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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