Many feel that students today should learn practical skills at school such as car maintenance and managing a bank account.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many feel that students today should learn practical skills at school such as car maintenance and managing a bank account.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In a world that is constantly changing, the school system has been facing deep changes as well. The technological development has transformed the way we live our day-to-day life, making having sound practical skills essential. Furthermore, financial education should play a major role in the education of children, given that it is worth teaching them how to run their wallet properly.
These days scientific and technical subjects have gained a higher consideration over traditional ones, like history or literature that are gradually losing their shine and importance. scientific subjects are so crucial that governments and universities around the world make attracting students to STEM courses a priority. this is a sing that time are changing and recruters are looking for high-qualified graduated with practical skills.
Whether being able to repair a car or a computer seems to be something easy to do, the truth is that behind this manual job, several skills are needed, like patience, passion, precision and know-how.
Many suggest also that students to receive a sound financial education. There are too much cases of succesful people who were not able to manage their savings and lost all their money in the wake of erroneous investments. it would be a god idea therefore, to teach young students how to invest their revenues proficiently so that they do not have to borrow money from a bank or that they are not able to pay back mortgages.
In conclusion I would strongly recommend governments to invest seriously in teaching practical skills and to put an accent on financial education too, so that society can take advantage of high-qualified professionals and citizens who are responsible of their own financial situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so, therefore, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24372759857 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99048477519 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627240143369 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.1350202268 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124678541377 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447556928956 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0259349735378 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0622875096443 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.017058742538 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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