Your local library wants to improve its service and facilities. Write a letter to the library.
Explain who you are
Make your suggestions
Explain how this would make the library better
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing in connection with the advertisement published in the local newspaper that the library intends to improve its service and facilities.
I am John Smith, a writer, residing in 456, Park's Street, London, and have been a full-time member of the library for the last ten years. During weekdays, I tend to use the library in reading fiction books, and I consider it to be a prominent place to spend my leisure time.
Being a regular member, I would like to put forward some suggestions to incorporate during its refurbishment. Firstly, the library should open a little earlier in the morning and remain open into the evening. I realized that this would be an additional burden on the staff, but it provides an opportunity for the members working during day time. Also, the library needs to update its book resource and buy recently published versions of fiction and non-fiction books.
I hope that these suggestions would turn into an asset to the library. Longer opening hours not only reduced the crowding during peak hours but also allow people to utilize library resources to the full extent. Also, this up-gradation can attract more outsiders to opt for membership.
I hope you consider my suggestion and discuss with local authorities for the amendment.
I look forward to a prompt response
I look forward to a positive response.
Yours faithfully,
Kuldip Kumar
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2020-05-16 | Kuldeep Kumar | 78 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03004291845 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7904455919 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600858369099 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8718956763 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1538461538 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9230769231 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69230769231 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223876723669 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724343777299 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447600425551 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0891008586849 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725945011528 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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