Write a letter to government about lack of sport facilities in your hometown for people on your age.
In your letter, you should tell:
what facilities you want
why you want them
what suggestions you can give
Dear Sir
I am writing this letter to bring your attention to a serious matter that many youngsters like me are facing in Chester.
In this digital era, one dilemma is that we lack outdoor activities for youth. Even though, schools and colleges include sports as part of their curriculum, the decreasing focus on the importance of sports activities is reflected in the lack of upgraded facilities.
The kind of sports that youth are into these days include soccer, volleyball, basketball, and tennis. The interest for these games rose from the last sports championship that was hosted in Chester and grabbed the attention of a lot of visitors from all over North Wales.
Therefore, a centralized sports center would help involve youth and increased community interaction in a fun way in my hometown. The sports center can include ground for these games and should also provide coaching facilities to the children who need basic training to develop expertise in the relevant game.
We as a society are in a dire need of engaging youth in healthy activities so that we can tap their true potential and for that sports can play a significant role.
I am hoping that you would pay heed to my request.
Yours faithfully
Sahar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 151, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...rest for these games rose from the last sports championship that was hosted in Chester...
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Line 7, column 101, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a fun way" with adverb for "fun"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...uth and increased community interaction in a fun way in my hometown. The sports center can i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95192307692 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66966785936 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610576923077 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.464380666 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180664957872 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067149464777 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368661107911 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775946874294 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288892997086 0.0580467560999 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.