Currently, deforestation is one of major concerns for global warning. For instance, an urban area without trees and plants surrounding will be impacted by pollutions and hazardous chemical. To what extend do you agree OR disagree?
Deforestation has believed to promote the process of globalization. I am in consummate accord with this statement and in my opinion deforestation will eventually lead to the end of many species on earth.
First of all, it cannot be denied that the positive aspect of the forest. They will keep the ecological balance intact and help the survival of numerous species including human beings. They have an impact on climate and weather conditions. If the planet has trees in abundance, the temperature will be maintained in the stable. So the more trees were being cut down, the more impact negatively on changing the global climate.
On the flip side, deforestation leads to irreparable damage and serve disastrous consequences. More and more trees are being chopped down to accommodate the need for population growth. This, in turn, is impacting the earth in a very undesirable manner such as pollutants, toxic chemical waste. For instance, the increase pace of deforestation accelerates global warming and the result is the melting of polar ice.
Besides, the forest is a home of almost animals. If trees are cut, the earth will be hotter day by day, which is produced forest fire. Many animals and birds have almost lost their habitats and facing extinction. For example, in 2020, the burning of the forest in New South Wales had caused the damage for half a billion of animals of this country, especially the koala is on the brink of extinction.
In conclusion, it appears to me that forests play an essential role in the survival of life and excessive deforestation will wreak havoc and lead to the global warning and ultimately the end of life on the planet.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93950177936 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82742397121 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569395017794 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2442192669 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.75 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219103707183 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637543192934 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383176001354 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111781737746 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378087251469 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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