What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?
An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online?
In this modern era, Huge amount of population has been buying needy stuff from outside of their country via internet. However, There may some benefits along with the drawbacks for local farms as well as residence. In this essay we will contrast both and provide solution, how can we encourage to spend money on their country's goods.
Firstly, Spending money on item from another country and it would be beneficial for a person. For instantiate, my friend ordered a game which is not made in his home country and then he found it google. For another example, china is known as a advance and developing country about technology. Some companies adapt Chinese advance machinery to make their work easier.
Secondly, Product bought from another country may not have grantee or warranty although, it makes other country's economy strong and that is not right for home town. For instance, When a person pay money outside which is directly reach other country's government in the form of taxes and it impact all over our business.
On the other hand, The improvement of the goods require advanced technology. In other words, maintaining the quality of local items which is reasonable and has life time grantee, warranty. To make local products popular in country advertising has a key role. Generally, people do not even know that the stuff they want is available in their country.
To concluded, People look for comfort and they are affected by advancement Nevertheless there are some cons of it. If people continue paying for products online that will raise unemployment level in home country. It would be great idea, if government make some schemes which is basically for local organisations and companies that will definitly affect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05923344948 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58580722587 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595818815331 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5600734186 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.75 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1875 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150295880942 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517668266917 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393102151366 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859358860242 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521114538608 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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