Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
I agree that life is much easier now when compared to our grandparent's childhood times. Personally I believe digital knowledge is ruling the world and it made our lives very much easier than before. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, in the olden days, they used to go to the offices to pay bills or to buy groceries. Nowadays this has become very easy by digital transactions through online payments.
My personal experience is a compelling example of this when I wanted to pay the bills for my utilities I just went to the particular website and paid from my credit card through the online portal link which they have sent me. My grandfather saw me when I was paying and he told it have become easy for you now, but in those days we used to go out and stand in a cue for paying bills.
Secondly, the studies and the courses which they were taking in olden days they had to go to the school every day and they can only take one course at a time, but now there are many online courses which you want to take and also you can enroll in a variety of courses you are willing to. This is because online courses save time and we can attend more than one course in a day from anywhere we want to. For instance, I'm in dental school and I'm interested in culinary pastry arts courses too, for this in the mornings I attend dental school and at night I attend culinary art classes. In this way, we can attend the courses we wanted and it saves time.
In conclusion, life is easier these days because of several innovations made by the experts and scientists from which we are living our lives very comfortably and happily.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, of course, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35350318471 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30689566677 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.8157109726 48.9658058833 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.916666667 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 5.45110844103 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111061036944 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470330579015 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061209981175 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0684127643224 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566888704301 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.25 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.