In modern society, people pay increasing attention to the healthcare issues and it is believed that a vegetarian diet with no meat is healthy for everyone. From my perspective, this view should be reconsidered with some disadvantages.
Granted, being an entire vegetarian will gain some virtues in terms of individual’s fitness, ecological protection and social harmony. Primarily, to some extent, it really benefits people’s health because the vegetable can provide fiber, vitamin and other materials meeting our basic needs. Meanwhile, once we become vegetarians, in another word, we do not ...
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