The continued rise in the world population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time.
What are the causes of the continued rise?
Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?
In today’s world the growing world population is the biggest issue faced by humanity. In my opinion, I believe that the rise in the human population is a great concern for the world as it leads to deforestation and the extinction of natural resources and thus leading to environmental imbalance.
Firstly, one of the main causes of the increased population in the world is the decrease in the mortality rate. As health care is improving day by day, the people live longer and life expectancy rate has increased. In addition, birth mortality has also decreased during the past decades. Thus, the rise in birth rate and a decrease in death rate is the contributing factor towards the increased population in the modern world
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Overpopulation is a big issue in today’s world and I agree with it. It has led to many environmental hazards. Furthermore, in many developing countries, to keep up to the demands of housing and providing shelter, they have adapted deforestation as the tool to cope with it, and hence, doing further damage. In other words, more deforestation contributes to an increase in overall temperatures in the world thus, an increase in the water levels in the sea. This process of global warming will furthermore, reduce the land area and thus, leading to more overcrowding
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Despite, of large reservoirs of natural resources in the world, such as oil and gas, there is a lack of supplies. As the resources are limited and the consumption is increasing, this impacts the agriculture and health care facilities as well. Because of the growing numbers of the population, the agricultural industry as well as health care is not able to cope with it and hence, leading to hunger and many untreated patients.
In conclusion, overpopulation is a great concern for the world and contributing to environmental hazards.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, so, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04918032787 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08006594508 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488524590164 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.201683471 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.666666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126254721265 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425501549677 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512780120126 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0708578304961 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655931096108 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.