You forgot an item at the hotel where you stayed on vacation recently. Write a letter to the management and say
• When and where did you stay?
• What did you leave there?
• What do you want them to do with this item?
Dear Sir/Ma’am,
I am Jacob Brown, a resident of 47 Notting Hill, London. Through this letter, I would like to draw your urgent attention to the watch that I have had left in your hotel room 376 during my stay from 21st to 25th of April, 2020.
As a matter of fact, last summer when I was traveling to Europe and had booked my stay at your hotel from 21st to 25th of April, 2020 during my stay I was allotted room number 376 which is a pool facing room. Unfortunately, I forgot my antique watch of CASIO brand, it has a special meaning to me as the watch was given to me by my father right before his death.
Having said that, in my distinct memory I had kept the watch in the drawer on the left side of the bed and I hope the watch will be still there because not much time has passed since I have checked out from your hotel. Moreover, if you find the watch can you send it through post at my address, I will pay for the postage.
Therefore, your quick retrospective action will be highly appreciated. Thanking you in anticipation.
Best regards,
Jacob Brown
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'April 2020'.
Suggestion: April 2020
...376 during my stay from 21st to 25th of April, 2020. As a matter of fact, last summer wh...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'April 2020'.
Suggestion: April 2020
...stay at your hotel from 21st to 25th of April, 2020 during my stay I was allotted room numb...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng you in anticipation. Best regards, Jacob Brown
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, still, therefore, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32019704433 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36131760165 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610837438424 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.5815725889 44.8134815571 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4444444444 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125535782981 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643050091398 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813994024306 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0830283118115 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251334067633 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 82.98 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.