"Governments are justified in circumventing civil laws when doing so is vital to the protection of national security. "
Write an essay in which you take a position on the statement above. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true.
Why is it that governments are justified in circumventing certain laws in order to protect the national security? Laws have been created and developed as the modern world has become even more advanced. By obeying the laws, people are more hesitant to commit a certain crime. The crimes may be varying from personal lifes such as murder to terrorism, threats inside the government and outside the government. Those would also argue that avoiding certain civil laws can protect national security. However, because people will be begin to distrust the government’s efforts in protecting the people; they will believe they have lost a sense of voice in their society politically and economically which is the reason why civil laws should not be ignored.
One example of exemlifying the people’s distrust in the government can be described as the lack of obedience the government can create if they choose to walk towards a corrupted government. Consider Hillary Clinton’s presidential electon against Donald Trump. Both presidential candidates have experienced wide hatred from a variety of democratics and republicans. It is fair to say that the election was not easy due to both sides being corrupted in the sense that involved business, sexual relations, and bribery. However, I believe clinton’s reason for so much hatred was the fact that the federal bureau of investigation has found numerous files and evidence regarding her use of money. This involves her taking a large portion of it and using it for personal needs. Because of this reason, she was not greatly favored by the people which further balanced off Trump’s wild or some people might say excitable and unexpected speeches. By Clinton not following the laws of the government, she has exposed not only herself but the level of corruption the government can reach by disobeying certain laws created for and by the government.
Although some may agree the government should lawfully follow the civil laws, national security can be protected to a certain degree if the civil laws are not strictly followed. Edward Snowden is surely a great example to prove this case. He entereed the government with a strong passion and believe for the government in wanting to protect the people; however, he soon discovered certain security programs, such as Shelter was used rather as a weapon rather than a tool of protection for the people and their national protection. Moreover, he believed in his descisions and morals to expose the government of their wrongful doings. His one action has allowed American citizens to be more aware of where they currently exist in this modern world. He made them question, “Where are my rights created by the United State’s Constution” and “Should I continue to further trust the government?” Furthermore, this is a prime example of a positive outcome in disobeying the laws of the U.S
As the bulk of the evidence shows, the reason why the government should follow civil laws outweigh the reason for disobeying the government. The government carries many responsiblites in order to protect what the U.S. has been brought upon which is based primarily on free will and righteousness for each individual. The morals the governmet carry is even implemented in their daily routines; thus, they need to act like it and not hypocriticallyso the people can fully trust any actions of the government. Consequently, in order to prove the government can be trusted and righteous, the government should not ignore civil laws.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 982, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
...outcome in disobeying the laws of the U.S As the bulk of the evidence shows, the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 12.9106741573 225% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2960.0 2235.4752809 132% => OK
No of words: 573.0 442.535393258 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16579406632 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89258810929 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87319721777 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 278.0 215.323595506 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485165794066 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 908.1 704.065955056 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.222948292 60.3974514979 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.695652174 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9130434783 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08695652174 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190310950543 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586592866573 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650965942733 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12670442525 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461754563056 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.1392134831 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 100.480337079 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.