You would like your child to have a day off from school for a special family celebration.
Write a letter to the principal and in your letter:
• Describe the family celebration
• Say why it's important for your child to be there
• Explain how your child will catch up on the work missed
Dear Professor William,
I am writing to ask if it would be possible for my daughter to be absent from school on the first Monday of next month. I completely understand that the school has a strict policy regarding absences; however, I hope that, given the circumstances, permission could be granted on this occasion.
The reason for this unusual request is that her brother is getting married the day before and the wedding is taking place quite a distance away from our home town. This means that we will be traveling back home on Monday and will not arrive until late in the evening. Obviously, her brother would be devastated and heartbroken if she were unable to attend this special family occasion.
As she will be missing a whole day of school, I envisage that there will be classwork to catch up on, and this will be done as soon as she returns to school. As you know, my daughter is an incredibly conscientious and diligent student and will be keen to be up-to-date with her studies as soon as possible. I can assure you that missing these classes will not have a detrimental effect on Sarah's academic progress.
Please contact me if you would like to discuss this further. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Arun Francis
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Professor William, I am writing to ask if it would be possi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tal effect on Sarahs academic progress. Please contact me if you would like to d...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...earing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Arun Francis
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, regarding, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69369369369 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59044650897 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608108108108 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.8444449136 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7272727273 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216168985524 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811152635654 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362682543791 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881610552013 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459055451743 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.