Dear sir,
I would like my child to have a day off from school for an important family celebration, which is my first sons wedding in another state; on 7th of December 2022.
The entire family will be leaving Asaba to Enugu on the 6th because, the occasion is by 11am on 7th of December. My first son will be glad to have his siblings around him on this special day, also my child will have the opportunity to meet his cousins, his grandparents and other family members he has not met before that lives overseas.
However, I understand the implications of my child’s absence from school, so I and my family will return on the same day immediately after the occasion, to enable him be in school on the 8th of December. I’ll pay attention to the subjects my child missed by employing the teacher during the weekend to teacher him every subject he missed, to enable him catch up with studies. I will be glad if my request is granted.
Yours faithfully,
Mrs Faith Ubani.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 808.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56497175141 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53117433213 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610169491525 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.080868002 44.8134815571 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.428571429 76.5299724578 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 16.8248392259 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271343573871 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120567164407 0.0766984524023 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058802693494 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176906194454 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450195491689 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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