In our world today, education is essential for every child. It is more important for children to study very well to enable them have a good job. In this essay I will talk on my disagreement for children to study mathematics and Foreign languages than arts and music.
Firstly, being educated is a beautiful plate form for every child. Education helps in ones communication skill and social behavior. It is good for children to study what they love, because it makes it easy for them to strive in their career. After all there are lots of things going on in the world today that children see as they grow and is their dream to practice them in the feature and also earn from it.
On the other hand, most children after years of studying other courses in the higher institutions still go back to what they have passion for. The reason why kids do this is because, they didn’t get the chance to study their desired course. When I was growing up for instance, our neighbor’s child always talk about clothings and fashion. So after years of studying mass communication in the higher institution, she could not practice it not because she did not do well academically but because she dose not have passion it. However, she had to spend more money and years to study fashion. Today she is joyously working in a big fashion company in Canada.
Finally, children are not supposed to be discouraged from their passion, whether is music, art, or foreign languages. All they need is the supportive efforts, from their parents or guidance to enable them get the best out of that which they love. There are lots of job opportunities in the world today. Most companies just want people that can do the work in their firm tremendously well, which they are ready to pay a reasonable amount of money with other job benefits. So there is job for everybody the most important thing is have great passion for it and to study it well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt for children to study mathematics and Foreign languages than arts and music. ...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...orm for every child. Education helps in ones communication skill and social behavior...
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Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
...assion for. The reason why kids do this is because, they didn’t get the chance to study th...
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'doses'.
Suggestion: doses
...ot do well academically but because she dose not have passion it. However, she had t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... fashion company in Canada. Finally, children are not supposed to be discoura...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...r everybody the most important thing is have great passion for it and to study it we...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, so, still, well, after all, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47225291428 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514619883041 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5126562003 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6666666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31576679784 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103800743216 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904115585677 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22076293887 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120775335125 0.056905535591 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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