Recently, the negativity in behavior is becoming worse in schools. lack of good parenting has affected a lot of children and it is very disturbing to the society.
In our world today, attitude is very important. Many neglect it, meanwhile it is the most important part in life. Due to the unwanted behavior in schools, so many children are affected academically. For instance, when lectures are going on in class but some children are outside having internet discussions. This act is so inappropriate and can decrease the academical qualification of a pupil.
On the one hand, the character of children as they grow is very important to the society. When a child lack parental guild it reflects in their behavior. Some children corrupts others in school, and the negative behavior increases. This is because the parents do not paying proper attention to the them, which causes a lot of damage in behavior. For example, some parents come home late and leave early to work. They don’t get to spend time with their children, this means they don’t have an idea of what they do with their lives. So therefore, the child automatically is growing with no parental guidance.
On the other hand, charity begins at home they said. Train up a child in the way he should grow, and when he is old definitely he won’t depart from it. When a child has good morals it is delightful, it is important that a child should have good conduct as they grow. Negativity in character is detrimental. For example, if a parent is accessible the children feels free to share everything with them. On this note they get the moral they need.
Conclusively, moral support and parental guidance is essential in a every child’s growth process in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lack
... behavior is becoming worse in schools. lack of good parenting has affected a lot of...
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Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun neglect seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much neglect', 'a good deal of neglect'.
Suggestion: Much neglect; A good deal of neglect
...orld today, attitude is very important. Many neglect it, meanwhile it is the most important ...
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Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ortant part in life. Due to the unwanted behavior in schools, so many children ar...
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Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... grow is very important to the society. When a child lack parental guild it reflects...
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Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'corrupt'.
Suggestion: corrupt
...flects in their behavior. Some children corrupts others in school, and the negative beha...
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Line 5, column 295, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'them'?
Suggestion: the; them
...rents do not paying proper attention to the them, which causes a lot of damage in behavi...
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Line 5, column 532, Rule ID: SO_THEREFORE[1]
Message: Use simply 'So' or 'therefore'.
Suggestion: So; Therefore
... idea of what they do with their lives. So therefore, the child automatically is growing wit...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is note they get the moral they need. Conclusively, moral support and parental...
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Line 9, column 67, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t and parental guidance is essential in a every child’s growth process in life. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86195286195 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74584440306 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531986531987 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.2995292173 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.7619047619 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1428571429 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0832739816121 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0261026057661 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367419686776 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0409550657258 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306587557175 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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