Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Some people think that the extinction of certain animal or plant species is the main environmental problem, rather than other environmental issues such as climate change and water pollution.
On the one hand , there are some imminent environmental issues faced by humans. Global warming could be a good example. Rising sea levels and associated flooding with the loss of homes at low land levels are becoming more frequent. Habitable areas are gradually shrinking, . Those are closely related to people’s living standards. As for water pollutions, around 3.2 million children die every year in developing countries as a result of unsafe drinking water and poor sanitation. Contaminated water carries various disease such as cholera and intestinal parasites causing severe diarrhea and dehydration. Furthermore, Dirty water provides a perfect breeding ground for mosquitoes that spread disease such as malaria and encephalitis. Water quality in developing countries can be improved dramatically with the help of donor nations and international organizations. Therefore people may should give more attention on this issues to save basic human rights and to stop further tragedies from happening.
On the other hand, some people would argue that animal preservation should be the primary consideration as they play a vital role in our ecosystem in many ways. Variation, from individual genes to species, gives ecosystems resilience as a wide genetic diversity gives us more options in the face of rapid environmental change, whether that change is due to climate conditions or a new disease. Without effort to conserve endangered animals, it will result in reduction in species diversity as species interact and rely on each other. The removal of a single species can set off a chain reaction affecting many others. For example, a great sum of flowering plants are pollinated by animals, and these plants develop food which supports the lives of countless species, including humans. The disappearance of pollinators such as bees, would bring catastrophic consequences on the entire planet.
In conclusion, although both views have some validity, I believe that people should concentrate on saving animals from extinction as it’s impact is more significant than other environmental issues in the long term.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, as for, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1969.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5308988764 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97981332896 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634831460674 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0628635005 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.388888889 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260951331425 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634417820775 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721524261299 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179987352602 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695663329898 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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