Some young children spend a great amount of their time practicing sports. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
An active way of life along with healthy diet have recently become one of the most important parts in humans’ life. Many adults have noticed that their kids are inclined to spend more and more time doing different sports. This essay will examine the pros and cons of the suggested issue and provide relevant arguments.
On the one and, this phenomenon showes many negative impacts for a player or their money. It means that it can cause major injures, and that could lead to medical expenses. Moreover, many activities require investment of big amount of money to play. For example, I decided to play lacrosse, but then I understood that I have to purchase an armor and a stick for 150$ totally, and that is too big for 2 months practice. Thus, most of sports may cause serious problems with behavior and some of them often require to spend money.
On the other hand, an opinion exists that activities are a great way to meet new people and socialize. It implies that the easiest way to make new friends is attending sport practicing. Moreover, many parents bring their children to a sport section, so that they could learn how to communicate with fellows. For example, when I used to play in a city team of soccer, I had a mate who was attending practices to spend good time with his friends while doing favorite action. Therefore, athletics is a wonderful opportunity to meet new acquaintances and talk to people who share one’s interests.
Finally, it is a great way for children to understand the basics of everyday life. It follows that kids could learn that to win one have to do their best and work hard, however loosing gives an opportunity to grow above oneself. In addition to that, Yale University discovered that at young age, kids do not understand what a competition it is and they are not trying to win, but have a good time. For example, my friend thought that he is better than anyone else at football, but after attending a practice, he noticed that to keep his superiority he should work hard. Hence, exercising is one of the possible solutions to one’s thought that they have achieved everything and there are no new horizons for them.
All in all, in the essay above I have demonstrated some advantages and disadvantages of active lifestyle. Although regular activities could be harmful and require investing, it is a possibility to meet new people and kids could understand simple moral through practices.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 362, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$150'.
Suggestion: $150
...ve to purchase an armor and a stick for 150$ totally, and that is too big for 2 mont...
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Line 3, column 398, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'practices spending'.
Suggestion: practices spending
... soccer, I had a mate who was attending practices to spend good time with his friends while doing ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2017.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 423.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.768321513 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6149350696 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529550827423 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 637.2 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4121890652 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.85 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.15 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139561114489 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422523852626 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381462240877 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0740654116381 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224196665521 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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