Nowadays families are not as close as they used to be.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What can be done to make families closer?
It is but an obvious reality that the family bonds have weakened during the past decade. I believe this is absolutely true and various factors such as education, diverse ideologies in one family, lack of personal space, and busy lifestyles, to name a few, are to blame. In this essay, I will elaborate some of the causes and present solutions to tackle this problem.
One cannot deny the necessary love and support for each member of the family is being faded. Families for generations used to follow their elders' footstep and family work, but as the time the has passed the lives have become busier and it is common to see both partners working throughout the day and have less time for each other. Besides, newer generations are attracted to other streams that are more in demand and up to date and have better pay, thus the children eventually move out to pursue higher education at the university. Furthermore, teenagers of this era demand more personal space once they hit adolescence, when compared to their counterparts 30 years ago. For instance, it is commonly observed teenagers prefer to spend time in their room alone or spend time with their friends more often than the family.
However, I believe with a few tweaks in the families, this bonding would stay strong. Firstly, parents need to try to bring their ideas and opinions closer to what the ongoing children are expecting. For instance, with the increased security in the society during day and night, it is no longer a definite threat for a child if they stay out longer in the evenings. Secondly, imposing ideas and judging them would just push them further away, therefore parents have to be more of a friend to their children so that they would open up and discuss their issues comfortably.
To conclude, It is acknowledged that the relations in the families have been affected negatively in recent years and extra measures have to be taken by the parents to maintain the strong affections in the family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82697947214 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51109970465 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565982404692 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.2842179029 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.615384615 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2307692308 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165397289827 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576658263412 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396937822966 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955887286974 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00350583722888 0.056905535591 6% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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