The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?
It is often argued that online shopping is necessary to people to buy anything they need easily. Some people might think that increasing website purchase may influence to all stores in society to shut down in the future. Although an abundance of retail shops would be significant, I strongly agree with the idea. This essay will address the perspective of how shopping in website affects the real stores in the community.
First of all, good service system would survive. In other words, when the number of online stores provides any sorts of high quality service for their customers such as free delivery, many people might prefer to use them rather than the existing shops in cities because it is more comfortable to reach. For example, comparing to shop offline, a plenty of online stores may give better chances such as a coupon because they might need to enhance their business connecting between domestic and international. Therefore, the development of the technology might destroy the outdated way of shopping because people prefer easier access nowadays.
Moreover, the internet business may be the cause to decrease the rate of unemployment. When individuals operate the actual shops in the towns, they would recruit some employees to run their workplace effectively to help consumers to purchase because the owners cannot afford to do everything themselves without staff. However, running online does not need to hire may employees because the system on the internet is very easy to control, so the number of employers might tend to choose running their business on the website. Thus, the economy of the cities may be deteriorated by vanishing unemployment.
In conclusion, in spite of the fact that many stores in the community can be a part of the neighbourhood, I assume that using online shopping will lead to all existing shops to close down.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 487, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to run'.
Suggestion: to run
...umber of employers might tend to choose running their business on the website. Thus, th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in other words, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1045751634 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69269940757 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4764085143 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.153846154 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236870107448 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849748613964 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687936199106 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166699846346 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800965928579 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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