The maps below show the changes in a town after the construction of a hydroelectric power dam. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams illustrate the number of noticeable changes after a hydroelectric dam was constructed in a town.
Overall, because of the appearance of the new power dam, the area of the forest and the farmland had completely disappeared only in a span of 20 years.
In 1990, there was an ancient structure and a forest with rare flora and species located at the west of the river, and in the east area, there was a village and irrigated farmlands. However, with the construction of the hydroelectric power dam, those features disappeared and gave a place for electric towers on both sides of the river except the villages.
Looking at the maps for more details, a new lake and a large hotel were built in the far east from the river in 2010. To build the new lake, the river flow was interrupted by mountains. A huge hotel was constructed next to the fishing lake for commercial purposes.
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| 2020-05-29 | haphuongpham49 | 81 | view |
- Some people believe that the only purpose of films is to entertain Others say films should have educational value Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
- Some people believe that the only purpose of films is to entertain Others say films should have educational value Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- The diagram below shows how orange juice is produced 73
- The pie charts below show the online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013 79
- Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports Why is it Is it a positive or negative development 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 741.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71974522293 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76991715989 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566878980892 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5854173813 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.857142857 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.85714285714 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149570726932 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762246677127 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0883021111869 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111257302614 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882110788398 0.0819641961636 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.