Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts, and that this money could be spend somewhere else. To what extent do you agree with this view?
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It is considered by some that the money spent on arts by the Government is futile and this money can be utilized in many other public institutes. In my opinion, I believe that art plays an important role in the lineage of the culture of a country and deserves adequate funding by the Authorities.
Firstly, art is closely related to the countries cultural heritage, which is seen in many museums, religious buildings, and famous monuments. In other words, spending taxpayer's money on restoration and maintenance will keep the culture alive as they are the only link between the history and future and will help to educate the new and coming generations about their history. Many of these religious buildings have intricate art details which make them unique from the modern building, this gives an insight about the time when they were built, Many intricate designs are the actual scenes depicted by the artist, thus keeping those moments alive forever.
Furthermore, these museums and old architectural buildings can also provide a lot of revenue in return as many people in different countries are interested in different cultures and hence, tourism can increase, leading to economic growth. For example, many beautiful buildings in France are the reason for huge tourism in the country, as people all over the world are fascinated with its heritage.
In conclusion, art expresses the rich heritage of a country and is equally important as other public sectors so, the Government should allot the same amount of money for arts as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.20078740157 5.12529762239 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75249064787 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614173228346 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.8211019949 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 196.875 106.682146367 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.75 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.875 7.06120827912 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176698747458 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812700686296 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901436713182 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116331170033 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713791161054 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.6 13.0946893788 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.27 12.4159519038 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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