The statement above enforces students to be sent away to a country unfamiliar to them in order to obtain their degree. This requirement poses several problems to not only students but their families as well--such problems include: family obligations, work obligations, and health priorities. These can all limit the students ability to travel to foreign grounds. Although studying abroad opens the door to many opportunities, requiring students to be shipped off like a simple package is not only unethical but impractical.
Enforcing students to study hundreds, if not thousands, of miles away from their homes poses a major problem. There are many cases where full time students are needed at home to help maintain, run, and operate daily living. Whether it be caring for a sick family member, or baby sitting younger siblings, students have priorities aside from school and many of these priorities cannot be held off for the duration of a semester.
The statement above seems to ignore the fact that a majority of full time students are working as a means to support themselves. Not every parent or guardian can afford to support their child while at college--forcing students to tackle classes and work simultaneously. By requiring students to leave for months at a time, they are being subject to unemployment which to some, is not negotiable.
There are many instances where people cannot travel due to health-related concerns. Some individuals have an intense fear of flying that can bring about anxiety attacks. Some people may need to have weekly visits to a clinic in order to maintain their health, such as those on dialysis. The statement above fails to acknowledge these types of situations adding to its unethical nature.
Although traveling and studying abroad is a great opportunity that can bring about new experiences, requiring students to do so as a means to obtain their desired degree is unethical and fails to recognize the issues it poses.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 317, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...lth priorities. These can all limit the students ability to travel to foreign grounds. A...
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Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...jor problem. There are many cases where full time students are needed at home to help mai...
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Line 5, column 65, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...s to ignore the fact that a majority of full time students are working as a means to supp...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.6327345309 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 28.8173652695 69% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 55.5748502994 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 2260.96107784 73% => OK
No of words: 321.0 441.139720559 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16510903427 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.56307096286 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85210956555 2.78398813304 102% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 204.123752495 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560747663551 0.468620217663 120% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 705.55239521 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 19.7664670659 76% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6340500331 57.8364921388 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.533333333 119.503703932 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 23.324526521 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53333333333 5.70786347227 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219995180314 0.218282227539 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739329738931 0.0743258471296 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508571619334 0.0701772020484 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122452623902 0.128457276422 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611085539387 0.0628817314937 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.3799401198 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.3550499002 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.5979740519 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.32208582834 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 98.500998004 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 12.3882235529 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.