In many part of the world, children and teenagers are commiting more crimes. What are the causes? How should the young criminals to be punish.
Alarmingly, various misdeeds among children and adolescences are becoming a big headache in many nations. To crack down on juvenile crime, The government ought to explore the caused behind such illegal actions, and after that represent some measures of relevant penalty.
The potential reasons for teenage criminalities are complicated and manifold. First, it can be due to the disadvantaged family environment. Some teenage violators come from violent or single-parent families because they are not given enough attention and guidance. It is conceivable that teenagers growing up in such an environment, in most cases, are more likely to willful and cynical, consequently, they are more easily to be led astray. Still, the effects of commercialized mass media also play an immense role in juvenile's perception. TV shows and news are providing too much detailed content about violence and sex, which might arouse some adolescent's criminal potential. Therefore, these bad background leads to some rebellion of teenagers and make them conduct some anti-social offenses.
Considering the severity of juvenile delinquency, it is about time that we should start adopting some practical measures of punishment. Firstly, the government must enact some strict policies to strengthen the censorship of mass media. The government is expected to strictly penalize websites that disseminate vulgar, bloody, and violence to ensure that children would stay away from such toxic content. Also, It is feasible to prolong some stricter punishment and prison sentences for some stubborn law-breakers, which could exert a deterrent effect on some potential violators. Finally, parents have to play a role as guardians of their children, they are expected to guide and educate their kids to stay away from illegal actions.
To sum up, by understanding thoroughly these causes behind youth crime, the government and adults could together adopt some suitable penalty to prevent teenagers from committing crimes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, so, still, then, therefore, in most cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6059602649 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94968441192 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64238410596 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0186739663 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.866666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161972943981 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507157002469 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385297763412 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996325415093 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300391428194 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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