Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school, while others think that it is a waste of time.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
According to a few artwork is a much-needed subject at the school level, however, there are others who opine that it is useless as a subject. This essay believes that how crucial arts integration is to creating well-rounded, well-prepared learners and leaders.
Art education helps foster a positive culture and climate in schools. When educational institutions amalgamate creative learning across the curriculum, disciplinary referrals decreases and effectiveness of instructions and teacher’s ability to meet the needs of all students increases. Learning a musical instrument, creating a painting, learning dance are important pursuits for pupils growth and improvement. To exemplify, a report by American For Arts state that young people who participate regularly in the arts are four times more likely to be recognized for academic achievements than the children who are kept away from art education.
Although, art, in virtually all of it’s forms, is one of the most fascinating of educational subjects, yet, it faces inhibitions among juniors. The most important reason for this practice is that subjects like science and maths equips and prepares students with essential skills that makes them employable. For instance, the number of engineering colleges in UK are more than double in comparison with the list of institutes in art & culture. Hence, due to common belief that high paying jobs in the stream of engineering, medicine and space exploration would need academically a scientific background.
To conclude, Although art subjects still not a popular choice among students and parents, it is imperative to include art subject in school curriculum because it enhances an overall creativity and essential intellectual skills among children which makes them a complete human being.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun artwork seems to be countable; consider using: 'few artworks'.
Suggestion: few artworks
According to a few artwork is a much-needed subject at the school ...
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Line 5, column 33, Rule ID: ABOUT_ITS_NN[25]
Message: Did you mean 'of its forms'?
Suggestion: of its forms
...ion. Although, art, in virtually all of it’s forms, is one of the most fascinating of educ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, still, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.03092783505 363% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 937.175257732 164% => OK
No of words: 274.0 206.0 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59489051095 4.54256449028 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10811042488 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 127.690721649 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638686131387 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 290.88556701 162% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.9552528433 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.363636364 76.5299724578 182% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 16.8248392259 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193156322336 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632433503948 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566610840992 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115868261824 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269891048015 0.0580467560999 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 8.37731958763 208% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 70.7449484536 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 7.45979381443 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 8.71597938144 177% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 7.59969072165 134% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 41.2886597938 225% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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