Dear John,
I hope this letter finds you in the best of health and spirit. Next week our Indian classmate Mike have a birthday, so I and Mrs Smith had decided to arrange a surprise party.
You know Mike is very emotional and last time while we are talking he told, that this is his first birthday without family. Hence, I approached Mrs Smith and she come up with an idea of celebration.
On 15th March that is Sunday next week, all of us are going to celebrate it immediately after class finishes. Venue, will be campus cafeteria and you must reach on time because you are always late.
I had already ordered a cake from Oven Fresh, near to your office, so hope you will pick it up. Along with it please bring some decorative items and a birthday cap to make Mike feel special.
Speak to you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Tom Cook.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Mike) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...it. Next week our Indian classmate Mike have a birthday, so I and Mrs Smith had deci...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 696.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51948051948 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.256939599 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.720779220779 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.6 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135471991452 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518333485979 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039475548844 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0744580473852 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171966703021 0.0580467560999 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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