Young people are leaving their homes from rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?
Can migrating to urban areas from the countryside increase the possibility of nationwide growth in the country? Apparently, more often than not it is observed by many a man that people from the villages prefer to move to a developing city in search of a better lifestyle and education. To my mind, it is doing more good than harm because an educated individual acts as the backbone of the economy in a country.
Arguably, people get attracted to the lucrative lifestyle of the cities for no reason. While talented individual fails to land a job according to their caliber in the rural areas, there is no shortage of opportunities in big cities. Given the current state of the economy, developing cities are able to provide employment in the different sectors of the industries because of the establishment of new companies. A painstaking research has had been undertaken by the Forbes Magazine, which revealed that there are 70% chances of an individual to find a job according to his ability rather than those who are living in an underdeveloped area of the country.
Notwithstanding the brighter side, the trend certainly has its drawbacks. As the majority of workers shift for a better lifestyle to a city, so the growth of the village is thrown for a toss because of the decrease in manpower. Moreover, due to a rise in population of the migrant workers leads to traffic jams and puts pressure on the infrastructure of the city. Although it is not entirely untrue, the real impact is not that severe than assumed. For example, no sooner did a survey conducted by the Indian Ministry of Public health during COVID-19 pandemic, than it was unfolded that due to the overpopulation in the cities like Delhi the burden to treat the patients of the virus was uncontrollable by the hospitals, due to which over 1000 individuals were unable to get basic first aid arising out of non-vital injuries leading to their deaths.
To conclude, but for any doubts, settling to a developed city from a village can assist an individual to improve their overall skills. However, if a balanced development is done by the government by providing better opportunities at the grass-root level in the villages, it would lead to a socially stable and professionally enriching lives; lest good outcomes should be far out of reach.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 362, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'act'?
Suggestion: act
...han harm because an educated individual acts as the backbone of the economy in a cou...
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Line 3, column 413, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'painstaking research'.
Suggestion: Painstaking research
... of the establishment of new companies. A painstaking research has had been undertaken by the Forbes M...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90330788804 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97535235063 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557251908397 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.465500633 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.642857143 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0714285714 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148538873059 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504935523568 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428720468947 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912104273136 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360451616291 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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