Write a letter to your friend inviting him/ her to a music concert. Please say
• Where and when does the concert start?
• What type of music will be played there?
• Why do you think your friend will enjoy it?
Dear Kamal,
How are you? It’s been quite a long time since we last met. But this letter will surprise you in a big way when you’ll know that I have been given 2 tickets to a Sharry Mann concert to be held next week on the 29th of May, 2020 and I am expecting you to join me for the concert as per your availability.
As a matter of fact, last week when my boss gave me a raise for competition of task before time as an appreciation, he gave me 2 tickets to the Sharry Mann concert as a gesture. I instantly thought of our time in college when we used to dream about attending his concert but we could never save enough money to do so. Sharry Mann is the main entertainer of the night and with the tickets I have also been given the backstage passes so we will be able to meet him personally.
That being said, in the concert, the singer would be introducing his new album and with that, he will be playing the song from our favorite album “the moon”. I know that you have been busy from a month on your ongoing project but since the concert is on Saturday you can complete your work the next day before you join the office on Monday.
Therefore, I hope you will manage your prior commitments and meet me at my house so that we can enjoy the event together. Pay my regards to your parents and let me know your plan as soon as possible.
Regards,
Jacob
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 219, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'May 2020'.
Suggestion: May 2020
...ert to be held next week on the 29th of May, 2020 and I am expecting you to join me for t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so, therefore, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1102.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 265.0 206.0 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.15849056604 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26257807003 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543396226415 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 335.7 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.4645399758 44.8134815571 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.2 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 16.8248392259 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248272901415 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871899375278 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627737736588 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161663445815 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407753073173 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 70.7449484536 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.14 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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