Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.
many hold that studying at university or college is the perfect way to succeed, while getting a job after high school is also agreed be better. In my opinion, I concur that graduates will be more advantageous.
There is no doubt that those who go to work after finishing high school also gain some benefits. First and foremost, looking for a job after high school maybe an proper aim for students getting bored with studies. By applying to some simple jobs, they can earn money immensely early instead of wasting useless time at college. they will become more independent and mature when spending time grappling with struggles in their life. For example, many vocational colleges are founded to teach people basic knowledge in some jobs. Additionally, getting to work early can help them gain many important knowledge and experiences at normal job. Therefore, they can use these information to grab chances in the future.
However, I believe universities and colleges are places which enable pupils to easily get successful. it is claimed that these educational institutions can provide people with vital information and skills which are indispensable in some particular careers like education or medicines. For instance, people have to be at a certain level of education and certifications to earn higher salaries while doing difficult and competitive jobs. Moreover, it is thought that companies usually employ those who have a nice profile or valuable certification. So, pupils can join in many activities at school not only to broaden their horizon but also make their CV appealing.
In conclusion, although getting straight to work may bring many chances of being financial independent, I strongly believe graduating excellently from universities is the fastest path to success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Many
many hold that studying at university or col...
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Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun hold seems to be countable; consider using: 'many holds'.
Suggestion: many holds
many hold that studying at university or college ...
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Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...oking for a job after high school maybe an proper aim for students getting bored w...
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Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...ead of wasting useless time at college. they will become more independent and mature...
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Line 3, column 663, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
... at normal job. Therefore, they can use these information to grab chances in the future. Howev...
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Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...enable pupils to easily get successful. it is claimed that these educational insti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29122807018 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86865227889 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614035087719 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9255716568 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.533333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315157588034 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901271357999 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851271452665 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186640625151 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373582994665 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.