Encouraging people to use public transport is the best way to solve traffic problems in the cities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The traffic congestion has been disturbing people for a long time, some people deem encouraging citizens to use communal transports as an optimal method to tackle this social issue. From my perspective, despite my partially agreement on the encouragement of using communal transports to cope with traffic congestion, it is not the best solution.
Undeniably, choking traffic jam attributes to the surging number of private vehicles which most people living in the city depends on for daily commuting. And during the peak hours, the clogging roads are mostly due to the private cars. In addition, the increasing number of private cars correlate with the dense population. Hence, by introduction of more communal transports and encouraging people to use them, the number of automobiles flowing on the road will be reduced and that will exert a positive impact on traffic jam.
Nevertheless, in the long run, the encouragement on communal transports will not truly eliminate traffic congestion.The main reason why the majority commuters choose their own vehicles rather than communal transports can come down to the comfortability which they cannot obtain from public transports where they even possibly hard to stretch because of the crowding people.Therefore, if government cannot guarantee a comfortable travel and control the increasing population, the flowing cars on the road will come back.And there’re other method such as widening roads, getting vehicles and bicycles separated, constructing reversible lanes, by which citizens can not only enjoy a smooth journey, but also ensure security.
To capsulate, encouraging people to use communal transports is not a sustained effective and best way to tackle traffic jam, other thoughtful measures like introducing decentralization, constructing new road are required.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64130434783 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14316345034 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590579710145 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 193.375282805 49.4020404114 391% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 194.625 106.682146367 182% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.5 20.7667163134 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234838288182 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108790215796 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750719077075 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16108044297 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625732732365 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.4 13.0946893788 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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