A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
First of all, we need to understand what we mean when we talk about adopting a same national curriculum for all students across the country. In this essay, I am assuming a national curriculum does not necessarily mean that every student in the country will study the same subjects. Rather they will have options to chose from. but if a particular stdunent choses to study a particular subject then the syllabus, course duration , evaluation ploicy etc will be same for any other student enrolled in the same course in a different part of the country.
Now coming back to the proposition. I do not support the idea of a same national curriculum for all students before they enter college. countries that have large population and encompasses huge area like the us, are generally very diverse in terms of geograophy, ethnicity, religion, culture etc. The curriculum for each state or region thus need to be tailor-made to accomodate these differences. Even in countries which are relatively small and let us say less diverse, there is a need for different curriculums for students with a different interests and goals in life. For example, there can be a different curriculum for those who want to be technicians. Their curriulum will include vocational trainings which general students won't take. Another exapmle can be religious schools which are very common throughout the world. they learn a bit more about their religion than the general students. but all the students who will study in different curriculums should have the chance to enter college. In college although they will learn different skills and study different subjects they will major in one area. if they lack some relevant skills in that particular area, they can always do a few extra courses. but we have to keep in mind that not every student will go to college. So, they should have a choice before entering school about which curriculum to pursue.
Finally, I rest my arguement by saying that a same national curriculum for all students across the country is not a suitable solution for all students. if we consider the geographic, ethnic, cultural diversities and the differences in students ambitons the option of having more than one curriculum is better.
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- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college 50
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college 50
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college 50
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, so, then, thus, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1869.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 372.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02419354839 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72798446561 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508064516129 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.4207826881 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.45 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333633284838 0.243740707755 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109245475188 0.0831039109588 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106707957668 0.0758088955206 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252352527807 0.150359130593 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225492607897 0.0667264976115 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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