Some people today spend too much money on their phones. What do you think?
Nowadays mobile phone plays an integral role in our domestic life as it is a social tool. Although many people think spend their own money on experiencing new features on mobile phone is essential, it is not worth spending too much money on the phones.
There are many reasons why many people wasting their wages on phones. First, the pace of the modern life leads to the loneliness which takes a toll on our well-being. For instance, people turn to paid-dating apps at the own expenses as the way to stave off their loneliness of self-isolation when they are under a lot of stress due to the heavy load of work. Second, work-related stress affects our online shopping behaviors. When somebody is anxious, they shift their focus from squeezing their wallet dry to purchase impulsively as a retail therapy to help them feel better and gain some control over the gravity of situation.
It is not worth spending too much money on their phones. First, replacing phone too often creates a negative impact on the quality of their life. They lavish a lot of money to experience new products launched by high-end brands due to brand-related social status effect, as a result, they cannot afford to other basic needs in their life. Second, using mobile phones risks them in the unhealthy lifestyles. Sitting in the front of mobile phones too often leads to sedentary lifestyle affecting their proper growth of body tissues, as well as, it is difficult for them to build intimate relationships with others
The titans of industry put every effort on improving their products to entice more users. But spending too much money on mobile phones is not necessary in our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, well, for instance, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85614035088 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55183022328 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557894736842 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.1740927535 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.461538462 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325039787598 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131592796639 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131889761947 0.0667982634062 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223247009177 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797018071258 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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