Nigeria is so blessed with mineral resources, Tourist centers, and a lot of historical sightseeing . There are various tours I would love to do in the country, but would be discussing basically three popular destinations.
Firstly, Nigeria on its own is regarded as the one of the best most visited countries by the foreigners, because of it's endowment.
I would love to visit the ikogosi city in Ekiti state, it is a town where cold water and warm water meet. There was this ancient story attached to it's origin, our forefather were at war in those days they could not settle their dispute about a landed property, at the verge of getting the land the fought and died, their bodies were buried on that same land and since then the spot has always being a flow of cold and hot water. A lot of travellers love visiting there, I hope to one day.
Secondly, amazingly, there is this popular sea in the East, I can not precisely say it's location. The amazing thing about it is the school but on it. The school looks like a ship, but the story behind that school is heart melting. They built the school for the less privileged to benefit from education in order to have a brighter Future.
Lastly, a long awaited destination I would love to visit is the OOPL Tourist center in Abeokuta, it is a place you will fall head heels in love with, their zoo is one of it's kind. I heard they have the oldest tortoise and a Lioness. I wish I had the time to go then in school when my colleague went on an excursion.
The three most important place I would love to visit is the Ikogosi city in Ekiti, school built on the sea in the East and the OOPL Tourist center in Abeokuta, I can not wait to give you a mouth watering feedback.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ers, and a lot of historical sightseeing . There are various tours I would love to...
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Line 4, column 206, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...refather were at war in those days they couldnt settle their dispute about a landed pro...
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Line 4, column 258, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , at
...le their dispute about a landed property,at the verge of getting the land the fough...
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Line 4, column 311, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , their
... of getting the land the fought and died,their bodies were buried on that same land an...
^^^^^^
Line 8, column 7, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , a
...der to have a brighter Future. Lastly,a long awaited destination I would love t...
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Line 10, column 159, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
... and the OOPL Tourist center in Abeokuta,I can not wait to give you a mouth wateri...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44936708861 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42527056768 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553797468354 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.9981413747 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.428571429 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17210469889 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520668434197 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554030624458 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884148741975 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034423513962 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ers, and a lot of historical sightseeing . There are various tours I would love to...
^^
Line 4, column 206, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...refather were at war in those days they couldnt settle their dispute about a landed pro...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 258, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , at
...le their dispute about a landed property,at the verge of getting the land the fough...
^^^
Line 4, column 311, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , their
... of getting the land the fought and died,their bodies were buried on that same land an...
^^^^^^
Line 8, column 7, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , a
...der to have a brighter Future. Lastly,a long awaited destination I would love t...
^^
Line 10, column 159, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
... and the OOPL Tourist center in Abeokuta,I can not wait to give you a mouth wateri...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44936708861 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42527056768 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553797468354 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.9981413747 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.428571429 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17210469889 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520668434197 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554030624458 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884148741975 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034423513962 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.