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Air polution is becoming one of the most important issues of the most important issues of todays generation.
What is the cause of this?
What can be done to solve it?

Almost everyday of the week,you can resd stories about air polution in newspapers.Infact some media have publicized the idea that the cause of many pulmonary diseases is airpolution.In addition airpolution is one of the most important issues that todays generation is involved with.Some people are of the opinion that this huge monster can never be defeated;however,I personaly believe that it can be handeled in variety of ways.In the following paragraphs airpolution will be discussed.
On this account,airpolution causes alot of unsafety environments to live in.In fact,deseases have bad effects in several conditions that make places unhealthy.For instance,80% of people who contact with airpolution have dangirous ilnesses.On the whole,airpolution results unsafety and unhealthy environments.
Accordingly,people should use public transportation.Indeed,the traffic is decreased.Furthermore,time is saved.however,one of the difficulties is to persuade people using public transportation.All in all,air polution is solved by reducing numbers of cars.
Which is tiggered by airpolution causes alotof deseases,in the final analysis airpolution,can be solved in a number of ways such as using public transportations.It is predicted that,If air polution is not adressed properly,It will cause alot of deseases.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, furthermore, however, if, so, for instance, in addition, in fact, such as, on the whole

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 181.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.25414364641 5.12529762239 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.45428604878 2.80592935109 159% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657458563536 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.2975951904 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.6722922272 49.4020404114 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 283.0 106.682146367 265% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.25 20.7667163134 218% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.0 7.06120827912 354% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227571770288 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123717749501 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105058137451 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123717749501 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105058137451 0.056905535591 185% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.6 13.0946893788 234% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -8.04 50.2224549098 -16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.6 11.3001002004 227% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 19.86 12.4159519038 160% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.89 8.58950901804 138% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 33.0 9.78957915832 337% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.1190380762 198% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, furthermore, however, if, so, for instance, in addition, in fact, such as, on the whole

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments