Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences.
Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.
People have different views about using computers a lot in education. While in some ways it may seem reasonable to use more than necessary as well as negative, I personally believe that utilizing computers for education purpose has a lot of positive consequences.
There are various reasons why it might be considered beneficial to allow people to be used computers very much for education. Firstly, there is a convenience that people can find out programs in shops or websites which is equal to their education level. Secondly, the memory of laptop is so high, therefore, it may save most books easily. For instance, I have abundant number of english, science and literature books on my own laptop that is smooth to carry rather than the same published books. Finally, online chatting and video meetings ensures that users can expand their knowledge with exchanging and also boost speaking capability by conversing foreign citizens in global village.
However, I agree with those who argue that it would cause to happen negative result. Undeniably, one of the most noticeable problem is disease of eyes such as, low vision, blindness and etc. In addition, psychological health is so as fundamental. Reason for this, working with computer for a long time affect to the brain system of human, as a result he or she may incline to be angry and bellicose. Therefore, people must set a limit of using computer because of not getting sick these kind of diseases.
To sum up, it seems to me that it would be better, on balance, for people to set a limit to use computer, hence they protect their health
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'happening'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: happening
...ith those who argue that it would cause to happen negative result. Undeniably, one of the...
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Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
... of eyes such as, low vision, blindness and etc. In addition, psychological health is so...
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Line 3, column 481, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...ng computer because of not getting sick these kind of diseases. To sum up, it seems to me...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88235294118 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69168871692 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643382352941 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8578886261 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.153846154 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.9230769231 7.06120827912 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189212294423 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583610834119 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532406636586 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112396598796 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511302961345 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.